Unless very abstract every painting would benefit from a focal point or centre of interest. The trick is make sure your chosen focal point doesn't melt into the backround.
In many pictures the focal point will be obvious. It's probably why you chose that particular subject to paint. Take the photo on the left: what else apart from the rowing boats could you choose as your focal point?
Losing one boat to avoid competition or toning down the colours on the lighter boat to lessen the rivalry might help. It's your decision.
Losing one boat to avoid competition or toning down the colours on the lighter boat to lessen the rivalry might help. It's your decision.

Rendering the boats on either side with no detail will help, even to the point where they are just silhouettes. Toning down or changing completely the red on the left hand boat and giving the man in the boat a red hat or coat will draw the eye from the side and towards the centre. Keep the warmth and the interest where you want it.
The choice of subject always helps. For example, when painting this photo of Fingle Bridge it would be difficult to justify any other focal point. But is that it? Job done and on with the painting? Definitely not. The blanket over the fence needs to go. It doesn't fit into the scene and it drags the eye away from the bridge. Even the fence would be rendered better if you drew the posts a different size, varied the angles and considered losing one of the horizontal lengths. Try to avoid symmetry and repetition and offer variety wherever possible.
The branch leaning to the right is also a distraction. It blocks the passage of the eye towards the bridge. Move it, lose it, spiritually give it the chop. Whatever you do eradicate it from your painting. If you decide to leave it the red or brown tinged leaves sprouting from the top will need to be toned down - red is a magnet - and what about the three pronged root at bottom left? Does its presence help? To help you make your own mind up the photo on the right shows the removal of the offending bits of wood. OK, it's not the smoothest makeover ever performed, but it's good enough to show the difference. The choice is yours, but make that choice before you start. Don't regret it afterwards.



The centre of interest in this photo is undeniably the man with the red jumper. If you were to paint this photo you might want to move him slightly to the right to adhere a little more strictly to the rule of thirds priinciple, but you probably get away with leaving him where he is.
It is often a good idea, and rarely a bad one, to repeat a colour or object elsewhere is a painting. Make sure your echo is less prominant though. The faded red on the other pedestrian is enough to add interest without detracting from the focal point.
Does the blue tractor in this photo detract from the focal point or does it become one? It's driving out of the photo, so will lead the eye directly off the edge. But if it was facing the other way would or could it become a focal point?
It's very small compared to the metal water 'trough', but would that matter?
I'll let you decide.
Thanks for your thoughts. And the time you spent.
ReplyDeleteWe can repeat to outselves "Plan your painting"
We can try image software in the studio or thumbnails/vignettes on the spot.
Sometimes it works ;)